Tuesday, June 05, 2007

Exams and Desires

My last creative post was caused by my inability to function (i.e., my being dry and unable to create my own post).
This post is here now because blogging is just more interesting that writing exams and correcting papers.
So here's part two of my last creative post (not mine as in my creation, mine only by means of me publishing it here, but mine either way)


Subconscious Desires*


The dark figure seemed satisfied. Pleasures of domination. Staring at her with the utmost superiority, he smirked. She looked up at him helplessly. But there was something not quite reassuring about the look she gave. Speculation.

"What?" he inquired.
And without further warning she jerked back her head and let out the 'liquid' she had refused to swallow, onto her 'target' successfully. Revenge. The dark figure grew impatient, however, still maintaining his awkwardly false smirk.

"What did you do that for?" There was a pint of anger in his tone yet no hesitation whatsoever. He moved closer towards her. That agitated her. She started to shake uncontrollably…Not out of fright…but tension. She moved backwards until her back was hardly pressed against the cold stone wall. Clinking, her chains tangled as she wriggled her feet feebly.

"stop it" she finally managed to utter under her breath, "don't come any closer".

The figure let out a monstrous laugh that echoed through the stony hallways. The voice shook her. Her heart sank…but she did not panic. Not for a moment. Instead, she looked at him boldly and with such confidence that intensified his fretfulness.

He made a grab at her. She did not struggle as he pulled her closer to him. She could feel the heat given off by his body and as much as her mind told her she detested him… it aroused her subconsciously.

"Don't come closer?" he whispered callously in her ear, "But you're mine…"



*Check out Part 1: Reluctance vs. Submission

7 comments:

White Wings said...

so let me get this straight, you're not the writer??
eager to know what happens
yalla, speed parts up :)

Ms Loala said...

I loved the style.
Now where's the next part? ;)

Hanan said...

ww. I'm not the writer. And be patient my dear :) What if Disturbed Stranger decides to stop writing? Can I invent the rest of the story myself?

ms loala. first time here? welcome. Read comment above :)

Alia said...

مبروك عليكم ميمونة
والظاهر نغسل إيدنا من الوظيفة بعد
وإلا شرايج؟؟

Zorath 3000 said...

you werent kidding about the liking distrubed things part :P Interesting .. very intruging please continue

Hanan said...

alia. Allah eybrik feech. And who knows? Maybe Maymona would be a good omen.
zorath. Wouldn't you agree that the disturbed can often be more intriguing? What's there to do with normal? The stories aren't mine. To continue or not is up to the author.

Deema said...

nice :)
the image is very similar to the one i saw in a an ashley judd movie called "kiss the girls"
very interesting, you must watch the movie :)